Happylewie's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sprites: Lose Control]

Storyline

It seemed to me that you do control sprites good already and from now on you need to improve storyline. People saw many sprite movies and beside the small Special FX you can manage to come with, the storyline will change all the perception for many.

Ken starts of from Mario Bros. and then get in a game (i can't remember which) that looks SO much like Street Fighter graphic style. The effect is bursted. And the movie looked like it finished on a punch that was not really a punch. Anyway, I voted 3. Keep working, I bet you can get to do something great!

lThe-Gamel responds:

Yeah, this was my first flash movie.. I hope to get better over time...
And There was difficulties with flash and some of the flash was cut. the main parts are in.
Episode 2, will clear up any storyline issues.

[My Childhood Pet]

Nice animation!

Your stuff was very nice. The graphic style is very simple and attractive, I like it. We heard sound loop 2 or 3 times, that was not annoying but a little sound edit could have been good.

The overall animation was very well done, except that maybe sometimes I felt that the 'collision' could give a little more than what you actually done. We don't feel that the ninjas are acutally getting punched. But that not that much of a flaw, simply an appreciation level of mine.

Keep up your good work! You prove that sometimes, blood is not needed! ;)

JeremyLokken responds:

Are we talking about the same cartoon? I guess Carl could be a ninja, a ninja with a sledge hammer.