Happylewie's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sprites: Lose Control]

Storyline

It seemed to me that you do control sprites good already and from now on you need to improve storyline. People saw many sprite movies and beside the small Special FX you can manage to come with, the storyline will change all the perception for many.

Ken starts of from Mario Bros. and then get in a game (i can't remember which) that looks SO much like Street Fighter graphic style. The effect is bursted. And the movie looked like it finished on a punch that was not really a punch. Anyway, I voted 3. Keep working, I bet you can get to do something great!

lThe-Gamel responds:

Yeah, this was my first flash movie.. I hope to get better over time...
And There was difficulties with flash and some of the flash was cut. the main parts are in.
Episode 2, will clear up any storyline issues.

[Ambush!]

Congratulation!

You got no score lower than 6 on the review which is very good!

Great animation!

[GHOST: Cover.]

Not bad...

.. try something longer tho. Nevertheless I kinda liked it.

[Final Fantasy 8 Spoof]

Not bad...

The idea was there, but the burning box was filmed for too long so it looked to me it was a reason to burn something and manage to get people watch it.

Nevertheless the overall movie was good, the idea was original but just didn't light me up.

[Ryo the ninja KID]

Nice Animation!

Your stuff was very nice. The graphic style is very simple and attractive, I like it. We heard sound loop 2 or 3 times, that was not annoying but a little sound edit could have been good.

The overall animation was very well done, except that maybe sometimes I felt that the 'collision' could give a little more than what you actually done. We don't feel that the ninjas are acutally getting punched. But that not that much of a flaw, simply an appreciation level of mine.

Keep up your good work! You prove that sometimes, blood is not needed! ;)

[My Childhood Pet]

Nice animation!

Your stuff was very nice. The graphic style is very simple and attractive, I like it. We heard sound loop 2 or 3 times, that was not annoying but a little sound edit could have been good.

The overall animation was very well done, except that maybe sometimes I felt that the 'collision' could give a little more than what you actually done. We don't feel that the ninjas are acutally getting punched. But that not that much of a flaw, simply an appreciation level of mine.

Keep up your good work! You prove that sometimes, blood is not needed! ;)

JeremyLokken responds:

Are we talking about the same cartoon? I guess Carl could be a ninja, a ninja with a sledge hammer.

[EmoLifeStyle3]

It was good but...

You could have done a little bit more. The overall is nice, even if some of the drawings are a little bit glitchy. Next time, try to make the music fade out or something, and a replay button, instead of a black screen would be recommended.

Continue working on your stuff, it may be awesome someday! You have talent.

[Dark Park 1]

Improved stick animation...

The fact that you have 'complex' backgrounds and a very smooth animation made me like it.

I know you said it was short, but I think you have a full potential to make a longer animation out of that.

I like the possibility for the viewer to suggest the sequel. Keep on going.

[Bobby Goes To Hollywood]

I still try to figure out...

Oh well. Mindless stick figure killing. Totally unoriginal.

Like the music... at least.

[Guilty]

Congrats...

... on doing something like this.

I really like the unconventionnal size (in pixels) of the flash. Makes it look different even if maybe, too small.

But that was good. I hope you do more like this one, and longer. ;)